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Collapsing
I wonder if they'd notice if I fell
I feel like these sequences
In my mind
Could be real
If only I'd let them.
Always sleeping
Never fully awake
Simply because
It's easier not to be conscious
And deal with your own true reality
Don't Cry.
And shouldn't I?
I've been left alone again
Abandoned for an obvious reason
My own selfishness begs it to not be
That way
Always
Professing to be a devoted
ONE
But only possessive by nature
As far as I'm concerned,
It's mine
ALONE
To be honest, that's all there is
At the end of the day
You still have only yourself to sleep with.
Hope it's not too cold in your nightmares
I wonder if they'd notice if I fell
I feel like these sequences
In my mind
Could be real
If only I'd let them.
Always sleeping
Never fully awake
Simply because
It's easier not to be conscious
And deal with your own true reality
Don't Cry.
And shouldn't I?
I've been left alone again
Abandoned for an obvious reason
My own selfishness begs it to not be
That way
Always
Professing to be a devoted
ONE
But only possessive by nature
As far as I'm concerned,
It's mine
ALONE
To be honest, that's all there is
At the end of the day
You still have only yourself to sleep with.
Hope it's not too cold in your nightmares
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Another poem, written for Creative Writing class. I love this form of poetry. I think it overall flows better. Its not constrained to the idea of rhymning and all that jazz.
You should be able to post word docs I think...
You should be able to post word docs I think...
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Now this is the kind of poetry I like. No rhyming, just flowing with the mind. Good job.